Hi Patrick, You did a nice job on your elevator pitch. A recommendation I would offer would be to stand during your video presentation; it makes you and your idea appear more professional to your audience. I’ve taken a few public speaking classes in my time at UF and they teach us to “hook” our listener in and you did a really nice job of that in your introduction.
I like that you are offering this as a mobile devise. I think you did a good job in your first pitch. I am not a public speaker at all, so this assignment was very difficult for me. You seemed calm and collected. You knew exactly what you wanted to say to convey your product to everyone and you did so confidently.
Hi Patrick,
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I like that you are offering this as a mobile devise. I think you did a good job in your first pitch. I am not a public speaker at all, so this assignment was very difficult for me. You seemed calm and collected. You knew exactly what you wanted to say to convey your product to everyone and you did so confidently.
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