Friday, July 13, 2018

Assignment 22A


1) Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OeFzZ8sMufY&feature=youtu.be
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. 
Most of the feedback was just saying it was a lot better than the first.
 3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I threw on the silliest shirt I could find in my dad’s closet to give the pitch a little more flare (and to show my attitude towards my own product idea). And changed up some wording to make it sound a better in my opinion.



2 comments:

  1. Good job on your final pitch. I think this is a good idea since your product will allow you to warm or cool your food or drink. I like that you expanded your thought to more than just to coffee and tea drinkers is a good idea. The food industry is so large that if you are able to include more than one the better your chances are in selling your product.

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  2. I think you did a great job in your delivery and your speech towards your variance heating device. I would probably try adding more excitement toward how you introduce the product and really make the message to viewers that they need this product and that it will change their lives for the better. It is important to make the consumer have a need for the product.

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